I'm leaving some additional details outside, in case I don't have time to include them in the final product. The story still works without them. They're just some other visual gags.
SPEAKER | SOUND EFFECT | ACTION |
| Indistinctive fighting between | Title screen with words: DRAMA |
DILLY: It’s always the same! Always the same with you! ROY: Well, everything was well until you showed up! DILLY: What? It was ROY: A loser, huh? DILLY: Yes, the most pathetic loser I’ve ever met! | | C/U of two fish arguing furiously. |
ROY: That’s it! | | C/U of Roy’s face, angry. |
ROY: I hope you die! | | C/U of Dilly’s face, surprised |
| Roy mumbling to himself, | Middle shot: Roy puts a hat, grabs a suitcase and |
ROY: What? I’m (Worried) Oh no! Dilly! | Small thud on glass. | Roy stops and kicks the fishbowl, Roy holds Dilly’s body, and |
ROY: DILLYYYYY!!!! | Small bubble pop. | Wide shot: of table with the |
ROY: Oh, Dilly! | Sad music | Roy crying, still holding Dilly’s |
ROY: Why do I have to be so stupid?!?! I can’t take it anymore… | Body thud of hitting floor. | Roy is angry at himself, and |
ROY: (Dying) | | C/U of Roy dying on the floor. |
WHISKIE: Don’t worry, Roy! I’ll save you! | Water splash. | Whiskie enters scene, picks up |
ROY: (Crying) Arrrghhh!!! | | C/U of Roy watching Dilly’s |
| | Text shows on screen: “On the next day”. |
ROY: (Sobbing) Goodbye, my sweet love! | Water plops. Things shaking inside a can. | Human hand removes Dilly’s body |
| | Text shows on screen: “A few days later”. |
ROY: Oh, Dilly… | | Middle shot of Roy almost down to |
WHISKIE: Don’t worry, Roy. You’ll be ok! | Chewing sounds. | Wide Shot: Whiskie notices, so grabs Roy, puts a |
| | Text appears on screen: “A few days after”. |
ROY: Hello, Hello, Miss Golden | Sensual music. | Hand empties plastic bag with |
WHISKIE: It was about time! Finally, Roy has forgotten | Dying sounds. | Medium shot: While Whiskie speaks to the camera, |
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